Crudely constructed
And cold sometimes
What would I know
A putz reading lines
Sometimes I wonder why
Someone so lovely can find
Someone as me in compare
Someone so sweet and kind
Tenderness
Your sweet face
Tenderness
Your sweet ways
Tenderness
Vastly different
Yet so much the same
We walk together
A poem woven in rhyme
Sometimes I wonder why
Someone as beautiful as you
Someone as me, a bum
Someone so patient and true
Tenderness
Your sweet face
Tenderness
Your sweet ways
Tenderness
A total mess
Rags of shame
He redeems all these
From wild, now tame
Sometimes I wonder why
Someone so lovely can find
Someone as me in compare
Someone so sweet and kind
Tenderness
Your sweet face
Tenderness
Your sweet ways
Tenderness
Our brokenness
Pieces torn apart
What could I know
Of tenderness...
Tenderness
Your sweet face
Tenderness
Your sweet ways
Tenderness
by: Drew
May 6, 2003
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1 comment:
i hesitate tocomment- in fear that my validation of yourwords might be an insult- incomparison to how deep real &beautiful they are.. i only wishto admire your honesty. your friendof course, natalie
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